Treatment
- Narrator reads out character profiles of all three characters as images of each appear. “This is Ron/Candy/Ziggy a year ago... Everything’s about to change for them.
- Ron is hanging about outside a newsagent’s trying to scab fags of people coming out/going in. He meets Ziggy Powder, gang leader, and ends up as an apprentice to the gang – but he has to be enrolled first. Ziggy sets him a series of assignments and the last one is to mug an innocent girl – Candy Ice. He doesn’t want to do it but he’s in too deep and will get shanked if he doesn’t pull through at the end of the day. So he sorts it out. Gets caught and goes to prison.
- Narrator shows images of the three again in the present day – they’re all dirty and scraggy-looking and messed up.
Moral of the story is to avoid peer pressure.
- Ron is hanging about outside a newsagent’s trying to scab fags of people coming out/going in. He meets Ziggy Powder, gang leader, and ends up as an apprentice to the gang – but he has to be enrolled first. Ziggy sets him a series of assignments and the last one is to mug an innocent girl – Candy Ice. He doesn’t want to do it but he’s in too deep and will get shanked if he doesn’t pull through at the end of the day. So he sorts it out. Gets caught and goes to prison.
- Narrator shows images of the three again in the present day – they’re all dirty and scraggy-looking and messed up.
Moral of the story is to avoid peer pressure.
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Character Profiles
Name: Ziggy Powder
M/F: M
Age: 19
Costume: amouflage jacket, Bandana, Tracksuit bottoms, Bucket hat, air maxs.
Occupation: Gang leader
Hobbies: Fighting, taking drugs, selling drugs, mugging people.
Character background: Been to prison three times and is serving a community service litter picking duty at the moment, as a result of being caught on CCTV petrol bombing a chippy in his local estate. His previous offences have been caught with a knife, fraud- claiming benefits and being one top boys in the gang- DA kRayZ Killaz. He currently does not have a girlfriend but has been married three times all resulting in the disappearance of the women, he has two children called Ronnie and Reggie. They both attend the local public school and are spoiled rotten by Ziggy.
Name: Ron
M/F: M
Age: 16
Costume: Hat, Hoodie, trainers, jeans
Occupation: ASDA
Hobbies: Football, smoking, sitting in the park, going chippy, waiting outside shops
trying to get adults to buy them fags.
Character background: Comes from a very bad estate where he hasn’t had the best life, his dad is in the army and his mum is always out so there is no one to look after him and make sure he’s doing his school work and attending school, his grades are very low and he has been labelled as a trouble maker by all he teaches, he was thinking of going to college at the end of the year but has been refused by all the different colleges which he applied for after his bad school record it’s no wonder they didn’t want to take him on, so he decided he would try and get involved with the local gang.
Name: Candy Ice
M/F: F
Age: 17
Occupation: Abercrombie and Fitch
Hobbies: Hanging around with friends, going to the park, going for meals with friends and
partying.
Costume: Jeans jacket, shoes.
Character Background: Great school record A-star student, very popular and very stylish with all the new brands and type of clothes, can be a bit of a bully to people and lives in a very big house where her parents adore her and will do anything that she wants, if Candy wants it, she gets it. She acts above her age quite a lot as if she is an adult but still wants stuff done for her by her parents as if she is a child. She has very good hygiene and is always perfectly presented. To her, her image is everything. Wear quality jewellery. Always dines at the best places.
M/F: M
Age: 19
Costume: amouflage jacket, Bandana, Tracksuit bottoms, Bucket hat, air maxs.
Occupation: Gang leader
Hobbies: Fighting, taking drugs, selling drugs, mugging people.
Character background: Been to prison three times and is serving a community service litter picking duty at the moment, as a result of being caught on CCTV petrol bombing a chippy in his local estate. His previous offences have been caught with a knife, fraud- claiming benefits and being one top boys in the gang- DA kRayZ Killaz. He currently does not have a girlfriend but has been married three times all resulting in the disappearance of the women, he has two children called Ronnie and Reggie. They both attend the local public school and are spoiled rotten by Ziggy.
Name: Ron
M/F: M
Age: 16
Costume: Hat, Hoodie, trainers, jeans
Occupation: ASDA
Hobbies: Football, smoking, sitting in the park, going chippy, waiting outside shops
trying to get adults to buy them fags.
Character background: Comes from a very bad estate where he hasn’t had the best life, his dad is in the army and his mum is always out so there is no one to look after him and make sure he’s doing his school work and attending school, his grades are very low and he has been labelled as a trouble maker by all he teaches, he was thinking of going to college at the end of the year but has been refused by all the different colleges which he applied for after his bad school record it’s no wonder they didn’t want to take him on, so he decided he would try and get involved with the local gang.
Name: Candy Ice
M/F: F
Age: 17
Occupation: Abercrombie and Fitch
Hobbies: Hanging around with friends, going to the park, going for meals with friends and
partying.
Costume: Jeans jacket, shoes.
Character Background: Great school record A-star student, very popular and very stylish with all the new brands and type of clothes, can be a bit of a bully to people and lives in a very big house where her parents adore her and will do anything that she wants, if Candy wants it, she gets it. She acts above her age quite a lot as if she is an adult but still wants stuff done for her by her parents as if she is a child. She has very good hygiene and is always perfectly presented. To her, her image is everything. Wear quality jewellery. Always dines at the best places.
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Script
Don’t get lemon
Henry Vines // Chloe Warren // Zachary Mitchell
SLIDESHOW OF IMAGES.
NARRATOR:
This is Ziggy, been to prison three times and is serving a community service litter picking duty at the moment, as a result of being caught on CCTV petrol bombing a chippy in his local estate. His previous offences have been caught with a knife, fraud- claiming benefits and being one top boys in the gang- DA kRayZ Killaz. He currently does not have a girlfriend but has been married three times all resulting in the disappearance of the women, he has two children called Ronnie and Bobby. They both attend the local public school and are spoiled rotten by Ziggy, he has two gold teeth as his front teeth were knocked out by a baseball bat.
This is Ronald comes from a very bad estate where he hasn’t had the best life, his dad is in the army and his mum is always out so there is no one too look after him and make sure he’s doing his school work and attending school, his grades are very low and he has been labelled as a trouble maker by all he teaches, he was thinking of going to college at the end of the year but has been refused by all the different colleges which he applied for after his bad school record it’s no wonder they didn’t want to take him on, so he decided he would try and get involved with the local gang.
This is Candy, great school record A-star student, very popular and very stylish with all the new brands and type of clothes, can be a bit of a bully to people and lives in a very big house where her parents adore her and will do anything that she wants, if Candy wants it, she gets it. She acts above her age quite a lot as if she is an adult but still wants stuff done for her by her parents as if she is a child. She has very good hygiene and is always perfectly presented. To her, her image is everything. Wear quality jewellery. Always dines at the best places.
IMAGES FADE TO BLACK
EXT. NEWSAGENT’S SHOP CORNER
RON is waiting outside a newsagent’s trying to persuade the customers to give him cigarettes. No-one does until Ziggy Powder enters.
Ron:
Alright mate, reckon you could get me a packet of fags?
Ziggy:
Yeah, what do you want?
Ron:
Ah safe, Cutter’s Choice mate, 12.5
Ziggy:
Alright cool.
Ziggy goes inside and gets the cigarettes while Ron waits outside. Change angle to door-view. Re-enter Ziggy
Ziggy:
Here
Ron:
Bless
Ziggy starts to walk off and Ron calls after him.
Ron:
Oi mate, are you the leader of the gang DA kRayZ Killaz?
Ziggy:
Yeah. What’s it to you?
Ron:
Just wondering. Was going to ask how you get involved, need a few dolla, know what I mean?
Ziggy:
Well, there’s a list of assignments deciding whether you are a snake, or whether you’re true.
Ron:
Yeah? I’m on that.
Ziggy:
Cool. Take my number, got no credit though.
Ron:
Alright, I’ll get top-up tonight if ain’t gotta pay gas. Give you bell.
Ziggy:
Cool.
Ron:
Inabit.
ALLEYWAY BY SAINSBURYS
Ziggy:
Glad you took me up on the assignments. Could do with a handy man. You know what I mean?
Ron:
I feel you cuz.
Ziggy:
Sweet.
Ron:
What are the assignments then?
Ziggy:
Got to lay down rules.
Ron:
Yeah? What’s this then?
Ziggy:
Firs rule.. Don’t talk about DA kRayZ Killaz
Ron:
Ok
Ziggy:
Second rule.. Don’t talk about DA kRayZ Killaz
Ron:
Yeah? And the third?
Ziggy:
Don’t talk about DA kRayZ Killaz
Ron:
Ok, I guess I can follow those rules?
Ziggy:
Cool. Then we should get a long, you show me respect, I’ll show you respect.
Ron:
Ok, sound.
Ziggy:
Here’s your list, get busy. I’ll see you a week today, at this exact time. Be safe.
Ron:
Inabit.
ALLEYWAY BY SAINSBURY’S
Ziggy:
Alright mate?
Ron:
Yes geezer, you alright?
Ziggy:
Yeah yeah not too bad
Ron:
Cool. So what’s happening then?
Ziggy:
You have one final job, it’s a big one.
Ron:
Yeah? How big?
Ziggy:
BIG!!
Ron:
Tell me then.
Ziggy:
Well I trust you completed the other tasks.
Ron:
Of course.
Ziggy:
Cool. Well done, many have tried and failed.
Ron:
So what’s the big job then?
Ziggy:
Meet a geezer out the back of Café Nero, don’t talk to him, just take the envelope.
Ron:
Sorted.
Ron collects the envelope
Music is playing to create tension as he goes to mug Candy(Chloe). He does the mugging, gets away, and goes back to Ziggy. As they are about to meet, the tempo of the music starts to increase again. Ron finds Ziggy, and is about to go and talk to him and give him the possesions when Ziggy hears the police and runs. Ron doesn’t know whats happening and before he knows it he's arrested on suspicion of theft and in a police cell.
Narrator:
This is a classic example of the pressure of gang crimes and reputations people try to withhold by committing crimes. Ron’s life will never be the same again.
Henry Vines // Chloe Warren // Zachary Mitchell
SLIDESHOW OF IMAGES.
NARRATOR:
This is Ziggy, been to prison three times and is serving a community service litter picking duty at the moment, as a result of being caught on CCTV petrol bombing a chippy in his local estate. His previous offences have been caught with a knife, fraud- claiming benefits and being one top boys in the gang- DA kRayZ Killaz. He currently does not have a girlfriend but has been married three times all resulting in the disappearance of the women, he has two children called Ronnie and Bobby. They both attend the local public school and are spoiled rotten by Ziggy, he has two gold teeth as his front teeth were knocked out by a baseball bat.
This is Ronald comes from a very bad estate where he hasn’t had the best life, his dad is in the army and his mum is always out so there is no one too look after him and make sure he’s doing his school work and attending school, his grades are very low and he has been labelled as a trouble maker by all he teaches, he was thinking of going to college at the end of the year but has been refused by all the different colleges which he applied for after his bad school record it’s no wonder they didn’t want to take him on, so he decided he would try and get involved with the local gang.
This is Candy, great school record A-star student, very popular and very stylish with all the new brands and type of clothes, can be a bit of a bully to people and lives in a very big house where her parents adore her and will do anything that she wants, if Candy wants it, she gets it. She acts above her age quite a lot as if she is an adult but still wants stuff done for her by her parents as if she is a child. She has very good hygiene and is always perfectly presented. To her, her image is everything. Wear quality jewellery. Always dines at the best places.
IMAGES FADE TO BLACK
EXT. NEWSAGENT’S SHOP CORNER
RON is waiting outside a newsagent’s trying to persuade the customers to give him cigarettes. No-one does until Ziggy Powder enters.
Ron:
Alright mate, reckon you could get me a packet of fags?
Ziggy:
Yeah, what do you want?
Ron:
Ah safe, Cutter’s Choice mate, 12.5
Ziggy:
Alright cool.
Ziggy goes inside and gets the cigarettes while Ron waits outside. Change angle to door-view. Re-enter Ziggy
Ziggy:
Here
Ron:
Bless
Ziggy starts to walk off and Ron calls after him.
Ron:
Oi mate, are you the leader of the gang DA kRayZ Killaz?
Ziggy:
Yeah. What’s it to you?
Ron:
Just wondering. Was going to ask how you get involved, need a few dolla, know what I mean?
Ziggy:
Well, there’s a list of assignments deciding whether you are a snake, or whether you’re true.
Ron:
Yeah? I’m on that.
Ziggy:
Cool. Take my number, got no credit though.
Ron:
Alright, I’ll get top-up tonight if ain’t gotta pay gas. Give you bell.
Ziggy:
Cool.
Ron:
Inabit.
ALLEYWAY BY SAINSBURYS
Ziggy:
Glad you took me up on the assignments. Could do with a handy man. You know what I mean?
Ron:
I feel you cuz.
Ziggy:
Sweet.
Ron:
What are the assignments then?
Ziggy:
Got to lay down rules.
Ron:
Yeah? What’s this then?
Ziggy:
Firs rule.. Don’t talk about DA kRayZ Killaz
Ron:
Ok
Ziggy:
Second rule.. Don’t talk about DA kRayZ Killaz
Ron:
Yeah? And the third?
Ziggy:
Don’t talk about DA kRayZ Killaz
Ron:
Ok, I guess I can follow those rules?
Ziggy:
Cool. Then we should get a long, you show me respect, I’ll show you respect.
Ron:
Ok, sound.
Ziggy:
Here’s your list, get busy. I’ll see you a week today, at this exact time. Be safe.
Ron:
Inabit.
ALLEYWAY BY SAINSBURY’S
Ziggy:
Alright mate?
Ron:
Yes geezer, you alright?
Ziggy:
Yeah yeah not too bad
Ron:
Cool. So what’s happening then?
Ziggy:
You have one final job, it’s a big one.
Ron:
Yeah? How big?
Ziggy:
BIG!!
Ron:
Tell me then.
Ziggy:
Well I trust you completed the other tasks.
Ron:
Of course.
Ziggy:
Cool. Well done, many have tried and failed.
Ron:
So what’s the big job then?
Ziggy:
Meet a geezer out the back of Café Nero, don’t talk to him, just take the envelope.
Ron:
Sorted.
Ron collects the envelope
Music is playing to create tension as he goes to mug Candy(Chloe). He does the mugging, gets away, and goes back to Ziggy. As they are about to meet, the tempo of the music starts to increase again. Ron finds Ziggy, and is about to go and talk to him and give him the possesions when Ziggy hears the police and runs. Ron doesn’t know whats happening and before he knows it he's arrested on suspicion of theft and in a police cell.
Narrator:
This is a classic example of the pressure of gang crimes and reputations people try to withhold by committing crimes. Ron’s life will never be the same again.
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Sound table
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Props list
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storyboard
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